I filmed this exercise about 3 weeks ago with Emily and Chloe (actors in my preliminary project). This time around, I did most of the camera work while Emily and Chloe acted and edited it.
The main objective in this exercise was to show the real characteristics of a Film Noir, which I think that we achieved to an extent.
The camera work in general I think is good, better than my last attempt on the preliminary project, I used a variety of shots including: long shots, wide shots, close ups, extreme close ups, low angle, high angle, and a panning view.
I'm sure that I managed to keep the camera in focus and steady during the shoot, so I don't think that's much of a problem in the video. The acting was well done by Emily and Chloe and the only problem that arised was the envelop exchange being too slow.
Another let-down about the project was that I failed to follow the 30-Degree-Angle rule; however, I did keep to the 180-Degree-Line rule and almost kept to the Rule-of-Thirds. In some shots the Rule-of-Thirds is strictly followed, where as in others it is obviously disobeyed, this is something that I'll have to work on when I shoot next time.
The costumes went well with the Film Noir theme, the long overcoats are a strong characteristic of a Film Noir. The location that we picked was decent, as agreed with by our class, it suits the Film Noir style and seems quite seperated from the rest of the world.
In our low-angle shot the sun was in the way of the camera, high exposure like this caused the shot to be very dark, which ruined that shot. Something to work on next time around would be to make sure that the sun is never in the way, I could achieve this by finding something to block it or just not filming towards the sun.
The music that we used was from D.O.A. (the Film Noir, Dead on Arrival) which Emily chose. I personally, as agreed with by the majority of the class, did not think that this music went too well with the film as it just did not suit the environment and actions.
In conclusion I think that although there is a list of things to improve next time, the piece itself is not too bad, and is certainly better than my preliminary project. The things to work on next time though, are: the Rule-of-Thirds, the music, the length of the film, making sure the sun isn't in the way and increasing the pace of each shot.